Well done... do you want more feedback? Here it is anyway! I think you've got your specularity too high on your hero building - you're making it look too 'cheap and plasticky' here - and I think you need to soften out your lighting too to keep things suitably 'zen'. My advice too is too warm up your lighting to add some appeal to your set, as I think it's looking a bit grey and sad; with those lamp-posts in the scene you might consider setting your scene at dusk, where there's still a lot of colour in the sky, but the lamps have come on. A number of students are working with glowing lights etc as part of their scenes and it might help you bring some warmth and atmosphere into your world... importantly, do not freak out or over-react to the idea there's 'more to do' - juts make a list and work thought it, tweak by tweak - and ask your classmates for specific kinds of help :)
I've given it a go and played with some lighting- I didn't really want to put extra lights in the lamps- but with a brighter setting it looks a bit better as it is! Not sure how to get lamps to be lamps (with light) Updated my hero building as well and I like how it looks :) (and I also can't seem to change it)
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Well done... do you want more feedback? Here it is anyway! I think you've got your specularity too high on your hero building - you're making it look too 'cheap and plasticky' here - and I think you need to soften out your lighting too to keep things suitably 'zen'. My advice too is too warm up your lighting to add some appeal to your set, as I think it's looking a bit grey and sad; with those lamp-posts in the scene you might consider setting your scene at dusk, where there's still a lot of colour in the sky, but the lamps have come on. A number of students are working with glowing lights etc as part of their scenes and it might help you bring some warmth and atmosphere into your world... importantly, do not freak out or over-react to the idea there's 'more to do' - juts make a list and work thought it, tweak by tweak - and ask your classmates for specific kinds of help :)
ReplyDeleteI've given it a go and played with some lighting- I didn't really want to put extra lights in the lamps- but with a brighter setting it looks a bit better as it is! Not sure how to get lamps to be lamps (with light) Updated my hero building as well and I like how it looks :) (and I also can't seem to change it)
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