Definitely thinking this is looking better... I can't do much more with it now and I'm happy with how it shows the city! This has been a really difficult drawing to do, but it's pushed my skills further than my comfort zone.
...Now I just need to focus on the interior shot.

Here's the progression of where I started and where I'm at now with this shot:
There's a final version with and without clouds/smog- which I'm not sure about so any feedback on this would be cool :)