Good start. A couple of teaks. First grey image (top) - Lose the 'gold block' around the text and move the 'Captain America' up to closer to The All American Hero. No need to the 'restrictive block'. Second grey image - Move the 'Captain America' right to be closer to The All American Hero (It feel like Captain America text is falling off the page - too close to edge). In both cases, remember to adjust the 'leading' so that text feels like a 'group' that belongs together instead of seperate lines.
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Good start. A couple of teaks. First grey image (top) - Lose the 'gold block' around the text and move the 'Captain America' up to closer to The All American Hero. No need to the 'restrictive block'. Second grey image - Move the 'Captain America' right to be closer to The All American Hero (It feel like Captain America text is falling off the page - too close to edge). In both cases, remember to adjust the 'leading' so that text feels like a 'group' that belongs together instead of seperate lines.
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